Money, power, lion, lamb. . . AWESOME Carrie!"I don't come any other way" - such a perfect way to send the poem.Jim
The Ying and the Yang of existence. And while you may be contradictory, you are extraordinary in so many ways. :)
Niiiice! Lovely rhythm. I don't come any other way either...must be the poetic disposition! :)
Good beat with a resonating ending.
I don't think I have the words to express how much I love this poem. Which is always troubling, seeing as how I'm, like, supposed to be a writer. But if words can't speak, actions will: I'm copying this down in my journal, which I never do, because I feel one day, or maybe many days, I'm going to need it.
Wonderful and powerful stuff here, Carrie. Great work, as always.
Love this. Great assonance and consonance, flips me down to the end... Peace, Linda
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