tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post1427060902128388786..comments2012-02-09T02:43:32.968-06:00Carrie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-31862690605884389302012-01-22T11:17:54.263-06:002012-01-22T11:17:54.263-06:00Darkly intriguing. Nice.Tim VanSant Writeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-22289476143951810902012-01-20T11:27:46.417-06:002012-01-20T11:27:46.417-06:00Yes, the atmosphere in this is the absolute best Carrie, it&#39;s what makes the whole story so alive - yes, alive, even though she&#39;s not - and vivid. So glad to read your Friday Flash again. Excellent as always!Deanna Schrayerhttp://theothersideofdeanna.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-60152719453507494652012-01-15T16:32:26.844-06:002012-01-15T16:32:26.844-06:00Nice story, Carrie. Terrific atmosphere, and I really like Stein as a character. Would not mind seeing more of him.<br />~jonJ. M. Strotherhttp://madutopia.com/blog/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-57205666235871820062012-01-15T12:49:48.071-06:002012-01-15T12:49:48.071-06:00You&#39;re words crept around me, setting the scene to perfection. Wonderfully executed.Danielle La Pagliahttp://www.daniellelapaglia.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-30986374364699329142012-01-13T20:31:04.273-06:002012-01-13T20:31:04.273-06:00Wonderful as always. I should have guessed what was happening when Stein was smoking at the crime scene but the twist caught me anyways. Great job.antisocialbutterfliehttp://antisocialbutterflie.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-17199586441817678622012-01-13T10:35:42.919-06:002012-01-13T10:35:42.919-06:00Well I didn&#39;t expect you to drive a character towards the light, Carrie. That was darned nice of you!John Wiswellhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07416044628686736927noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-60324116271575312212012-01-13T08:24:45.765-06:002012-01-13T08:24:45.765-06:00Super atmosphere. This was deadly (pardon the pun).Lauritahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/03688820247531607677noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-14797892737416399422012-01-13T08:22:16.293-06:002012-01-13T08:22:16.293-06:00Terrific story, Carrie. Just the right mix of hard edge and compassion.Tony Nolandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-28065265813469317912012-01-13T08:18:31.251-06:002012-01-13T08:18:31.251-06:00Cathy&#39;s right, Carrie..this is wonderful, I love the character! Are you going to write a longer story around Stein? Maybe a novel :-) Love these kinds of paranormal tales and with your writing style, this would be the bomb!shannonhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17063218369150683990noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-27937752183810863132012-01-13T08:02:14.433-06:002012-01-13T08:02:14.433-06:00Holy CRAP that was good!<br />I mean EXCELLENT. Even all-caps don&#39;t describe how freakin&#39; awesome this story is.<br />Crackerjack writing from the first word to the last, fantastic closing, everything in between is just plain superlative. You can tell you&#39;ve been writing. I mean, I&#39;ve always been a huge fan of your Friday Flashes but this one is the best ever.<br />Sell this one, Carrie. It&#39;s very, very, very good.Cathy Olliffe-Websterhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12729578896443750402noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-42005600402563712352012-01-12T22:59:17.583-06:002012-01-12T22:59:17.583-06:00Lovely! Thought I&#39;d share this link: http://www.uniondale.co.za/index.php?page_name=more&amp;a_id=1&amp;submenu_id=1<br /><br />It&#39;s the story of the Uniondale Ghost, which is a South African phantom hitchhiker story.Nerine Dormanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12885964421325041778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-38719989154561168032012-01-12T18:14:56.080-06:002012-01-12T18:14:56.080-06:0032 years is a very long time!! But she&#39;s found the light at last!Sonia Lalhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.comnoreply@blogger.com