tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post3497781553307635375..comments2011-08-22T00:27:59.443-05:00Carrie Clevengerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05093923008179106837noreply@blogger.comBlogger19125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-74577227938154953162011-08-22T00:27:59.443-05:002011-08-22T00:27:59.443-05:00Love this Carrie... Such an intriguing idea. I, too, welcome your return to Friday flashes. ;)Bukowski's Basementhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11413377601369107260noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-65327090181711916142011-08-19T18:35:15.572-05:002011-08-19T18:35:15.572-05:00Creepy....amazing how so little, can convey so much :-)<br />Alannahsinisterechoes.comhttp://sinisterechoes.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-12638819878657524562011-08-19T13:36:06.491-05:002011-08-19T13:36:06.491-05:00So short but oh so effective - great rhythm, very poetic.darkanddemurehttp://annecmichaud.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-50255929060619953552011-08-19T10:58:25.092-05:002011-08-19T10:58:25.092-05:00And where is the wee one? The picture sells this even more.<br />Creepy at its best, Carrie.pegjethttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15255191759031800811noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-17203919325330693772011-08-19T07:02:19.570-05:002011-08-19T07:02:19.570-05:00Carrie, you&#39;re brilliant. Remarkable imagery.<br />Adam B @revhappinessafullnessinbrevityhttp://afullnessinbrevity.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-44471679584945038702011-08-19T06:51:01.458-05:002011-08-19T06:51:01.458-05:00Oh, so creepy... I don&#39;t want to evaluate her epiphany too much.Jen Brubacherhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01425418200940737247noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-34607770592128987122011-08-19T04:34:40.421-05:002011-08-19T04:34:40.421-05:00A perfect bedtime story!Tim VanSant Writeshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17614259042362664840noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-72051945574278739092011-08-19T04:26:10.036-05:002011-08-19T04:26:10.036-05:00This is fantastic - packs a lot of punch. So glad you&#39;re writing these again. :-)Icy Sedgwickhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/11501193571425442406noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-39341788650860775242011-08-19T03:33:26.849-05:002011-08-19T03:33:26.849-05:00Nice and chilling... Brrrrr!Nerine Dormanhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/12885964421325041778noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-77886405519280761062011-08-19T03:27:12.592-05:002011-08-19T03:27:12.592-05:00Oh that&#39;s great, in such a few words, I wish I could do that!alisonwellshttp://alisonwells.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-52317657538898479372011-08-19T03:17:48.553-05:002011-08-19T03:17:48.553-05:00A Faustian tale of wishful thinking methinks. Another win for sleep the eternal foeJason Cogginshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/09509338964933754054noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-68735003847908135442011-08-18T23:43:15.627-05:002011-08-18T23:43:15.627-05:00Good one! The picture is the perfect accompaniment with the ending.Eric J. Krausehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/05774468607814244185noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-28456527294619134022011-08-18T22:08:13.302-05:002011-08-18T22:08:13.302-05:00I thought I had a brilliant idea until I read this.Draco Torrehttp://www.blogger.com/profile/10076907555584959149noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-78761115740218619962011-08-18T20:38:40.426-05:002011-08-18T20:38:40.426-05:00So much intensity stuffed into so few words. Amazing as per usual.antisocialbutterfliehttp://antisocialbutterflie.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-32485548750861459432011-08-18T20:10:25.687-05:002011-08-18T20:10:25.687-05:00awesome story :) just enough to make me want to read more!Rutaliahttp://www.blogger.com/profile/16908196303547634771noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-61219842383536646572011-08-18T19:59:08.945-05:002011-08-18T19:59:08.945-05:00Nice one, as always. ;)Wookies Girlhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/07726231846622344573noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-46195628039258799342011-08-18T19:42:07.936-05:002011-08-18T19:42:07.936-05:00That last line was a bit creepy! But perfect.storytreasuryhttp://storytreasury.wordpress.com/noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-85318905224964194852011-08-18T19:20:09.582-05:002011-08-18T19:20:09.582-05:00I love these short short stories that send chills up your spine the whole read. You picked an excellent subject as well.W. J. Howardhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/02703933737085081545noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-5375968406108179327.post-89881804537232329972011-08-18T18:59:06.297-05:002011-08-18T18:59:06.297-05:00How many times have I longed for the ability to forego sleep, to skip over all that time wasted in unproductive unconsciousness. And then I think of the price I&#39;d have to pay...<br /><br />... which you presented in such a deliciously creepy manner.Tony Nolandhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15090583562737225942noreply@blogger.com